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the explorer shrugs
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the explorer shrugs |
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ljossberir Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 81Ny, USA 
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The Explorer Shrugs Matt Keach You are roaming in the wild Stuck on the outside, looking in. You are touring the country side. Fallen on the inside, looking out. I, have traversed the outside... I've wandered every hole in the sponge... I've struggled in valleys of acceptance and rejoiced in mountains of denial. Alas I am disheartened, and want for nothing but to stop and sulk in this void; the best terrain i've yet found. Best wishes for your hastened voyage and an early retirement. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I've wandered every hole in the sponge... I've struggled in valleys of acceptance Nice spin to this Matt~ I liked those lines especially. |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Early retirement sounds good to me - even though I'm an explorer at heart... Nice write...  |
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