Open Poetry #26 |
Purify Me |
Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
My love, please go to the well of my soul For it overflows with tears of sad yesteryears. Do not drink of it just yet as it is toxic. You were called upon to extract the poisons. With love and patience, it can be purified. Then you may sip of the authentic me. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!!What a stunning way to speak of the pain in your heart and how love can heal even the most damaged heart....Wonderful... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Pat, Wonderful in more ways than one. The concept is beautiful in this. I enjoy your writing a great deal. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I especially liked this: With love and patience, it can be purified. Then you may sip of the authentic me look forward to more |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Patricia, toxic? Perhaps only to the unenlightened... and this... should shed the appropriate light on the subject. Enjoyed this, my friend... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
May these beautiful and powerful words you write serve as a cleansing to your deep spiritual waters...and to those who read them. Thank you. Eric |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Pat, I liked this the first time and even more now. Absolutely, yes, toxic... I do understand that 100%..... Love your mind....Hugs, Pat |
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Shlee Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 72USA |
I REALLY like this. Very nice. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Very cool poem. I really really liked this! Nicely done Tara |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Patricia - do not yet yesteryear bind thee, for the future brings promise always. Hope all is well with you... BC |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Patience lets the overflow of tears evaporate Culminating in the clouds awaiting their escape Streaming down in torrents pure to quench a lover’s thirst Moistening our lips so parched A kiss felt like the first Richy |
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Sonic Junior Member
since 2003-05-06
Posts 13Victoria, Australia |
knowing the poison first hand this spoke volumes. thank you patricia. |
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MikeFessel Member
since 2003-04-19
Posts 321Brooklyn, NYC, USA |
Patricia, Oh great, great poem! Oh that all our poisons can all be purified by another.I believe it is true, I really do! Mike |
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