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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2003-05-14 08:09 PM

There was a moment.

Our breath fell together in
the rhythm of the
world.

Do you remember?

One...maybe two drawn
breaths -

Hours later...and I still
feel your pulse.

It pulls to my blood as
our own secret
tide.

This must be what oceans
feel in the rising of
the moon.

And it was only for
a moment.

Do you remember?

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-05-14 08:19 PM

wonderful thoughts

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

2 posted 2003-05-14 09:31 PM

Delicious in its spiritual sensuality; I can feel the warmth, passion, and love in these words. Brings to mind incredibly beautiful visions and thoughts... sweet, soft, gentle, sexy.

Thank you for this poetic embrace. It is wonderful. Definitely a favorite of mine.

I love you,
Moca

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2003-05-14 09:59 PM

Ericc

I remember something very similar...your words are beautiful and filled with love.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-05-14 10:44 PM

Yes...I remember moments such as this.
Beautiful...sensual thoughts fill my mind.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Etain
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 92
The moon...

5 posted 2003-05-14 10:48 PM

The ocean tide
just like the blood
waving into the veins,
beautiful analogy
the world beats inside
with the same power.
Beautiful.
Love,
Etain.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-05-15 12:54 PM

I WISH I had THIS memory . . .

you write beautifully Ericc
xxoo

Sunkissed
Senior Member

since 2002-12-03

Posts 610

7 posted 2003-05-15 08:45 AM

Beautifully written, Eric.

Sunkissed.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-05-15 09:42 AM

Eric, this is so romantic.
I really love this verse......

This must be what oceans
feel in the rising of
the moon.

Hugs,
Ethel

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2003-05-16 06:05 PM

Only a moment
breathing each other
forever imprinting
a magical tune
of love
on our hearts
echoing throughout
the world ...
and memories awaken
with each moonrise ...

You inspire dear Eric! Your poem is of exquisite beauty.
Love, Margherita

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2003-05-16 08:12 PM

enjoyed

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

11 posted 2003-05-16 08:17 PM

Love this one very much. You have a way with words... treasure it.

~Kelly~

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

12 posted 2003-05-16 09:01 PM

I remember...because this moment...and everytime I read your verse I feel the warmth of romance.

Thanks for doing what you do so well,

-Patricia

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2003-05-17 06:12 AM

very passionate writing

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

14 posted 2003-05-17 05:56 PM

Ericc,

Another nice piece of writing. Excellent.

SG

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