Open Poetry #26 |
And She Walks Soft Thundered ... |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
And She Walks Soft Thundered … ~*Marge Tindal*~ And she walks soft thundered on rolling clouds of discontent Sending messages to rain the earth in her sorrowful lament~ Fills the vessel to overflowing in wisdom that I must comprehend SkyeLara’s voice from the spirited sky sends me in search of new Earth-mend~ Lightning fast she parts the clouds as I hear her soft thundered roll Mankind must conscientiously tend before the storm runs the full wrath of her soul~ ~SkyeLara's message comes to remind us that we do not yet tend this precious Earth the way we should~ May 2003 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes Marge, she is busy washing off the dirt we leave behind... thank you for this lovely reminder that we must tend to what is only in our possession for such a short time... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May we not just hear her message, but truly listen... Warm hugs, Linda |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed the vision in this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Enjoying your spirit works Marge... The cleansing in all it's softer sides, and deliberate acclamations! TD |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: So very true! I wonder if we will ever learn! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
a well written message It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well spoken Marge...great message. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome writing ladyfriend! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is lovely, Marge! I haven't had the pleasure of reading one of your Native American poems in a while. It's a breath of fresh air! Cor |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is so pretty .. and true. Love, Betty |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Marge...You know how I love Native American poems. This is just so exquisite. Beautiful imagery throughout ***Ivy Rose |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very powerful and moving. Eric |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
The Earth grows ever more artificial... and now, we wear raincoats so we don't feel the rain when it falls. For some reason, it bothers us. Along the same lines, a soldier is taught never to look in the eyes of his enemy... Poets are the unacknowledged legislators of the world. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis This muse is always so wise and deep...so like you! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ SkyLara and I thank you for your beautiful replies~ I am but the vessel that she pours her thoughts in~ My mission is to share~ Thank you for allowing me to do so. *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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