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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack 
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I am offered a heart Giftwrapped in barbed wire The more our souls intertwine The more I bleed Pursueing pleasure and pain I am cursed to enraptured misery Entranced by a mirror I see her soul A pure, beautifully twisted spirit Cloaked in enticing darkness Having known agony would result... Why do I question the turmoil? So I ride the waves of ecstasy Eagerly anticipating heartache Maybe masochistic... definitely me I hand her my heart and a silver stake . . . all that we see is but a dream within a dream . . . [This message has been edited by dreambuilder (04-16-2003 10:11 PM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh my! You've got it bad dreambuilder. lol. Enjoyed your write this evening. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I hand her my heart and a silver stake One of the greatest lines I have read in a long time...an absolutely amazing write |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
dream: I pictured her . . . you painted her here for us . . . "a pure, beautifully twisted spirit" love the stake . . . had one through my own a time a two - but the wave is worth riding . . . truly brilliant - you are becoming one of my favorite writers quickly xxoo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
bump |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Oh gosh...you too. Just been through a similar thing. I let him go in the physical...told him I couldn't see him anymore, but my heart holds on to the dreams of what could have been. It is getting better each day, but I have my moments. For example, the tears fell again today when I was listening to a song in my car. Know this, my friend, I know the pain you brought forth in your words. -Patricia |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
dreambuilder, if she hasn't already drove a stake through the heart you've given to her, I hope she doesn't. You know we women are unpredictable sometimes....she could very well fool you....  Best wishes to you. Hugs, Ethel |
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