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dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

0 posted 2003-05-13 06:11 PM

Death is an easy opponent
As there is some control over it
And it will happen

Love isn't easy
You can't control it
And true love... may never happen

Life,like love, can be deceptive
Just when you think you've got it
it can slip away

Destiny is the light of lovers
Soul crusher of loneliness
The only guarantee...
you will experience both sides

Death isn't scarey
Love is

Life is always a pursuit
and Destiny...
just is

. . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . .

[This message has been edited by dreambuilder (05-13-2003 06:44 PM).]

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

1 posted 2003-05-13 06:53 PM

Dreambuilder,

Death isn't scarey
Love is

You hit it here. This is so true. I am not a fearful person. I have been through a great deal in my life, but this love thing is scary. Having had my heart broken about two months ago, I fear it ever happening again...fear it worse than death right now.

Thanks for letting me know you feel the same way in your beautiful verse.

-Patricia

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-05-13 07:02 PM

I enjoyed your thoughts on love and life and death! A lot of truth here!

Love & Life,
EA

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-05-13 10:31 PM

And true love... may never happen

I think there's a better chance of the Buffalo Bills winning the superbowl then finding true love and we all know how futile that is..

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-05-14 01:30 AM

dream: I agree - I have had more death through love - but it is out there - I have known it many times . . . or thought I have . . . amazing write - you got it right here by "destiny" . . .

Some things are just meant to be . . .

and ummm ahhh Hey Raph? If you think love is THAT hard to find - true love - you are as insane as I think you are - hard to find - yes - futile - no

nice write dream
xxoo

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

5 posted 2003-05-15 04:55 PM

Patricia - thank-you for the compliment
& trust me I know heartache

Earth Angel - I know its not my best write - but I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always enjoy your replies

Raph - I agree - the future looks dim on both fronts

lil - Yes - or thought I have - too true
& I hope its not as futile as that

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-05-16 05:56 AM

dream:

this saddens me so . . .
xxoo

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