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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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there is something about rain that light just can't reflect something like finding a hayneedlestack you know that it's there but that finding it will be a challenge once, I tried to rain split drop with a knife the sharper the blade the easier it is to do only, you'll find that it's better done with an umbrella -------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is way cool...you've taken this theme to the fullest extent. I love the way you write. This is a keeper  Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
 a touch of SVeeN cumm(in)gs this yep |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - yep, a touch of you... BC |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thanks to the three of you. . . yep, it's one of my many forays into the more interesting corners of my mind. . . LOL thanks for joining. . . --------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) It just needs a soft place to fall, there it is so much easier to identify with and you can almost feel its empathy! (big hugggssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you both so much!! ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Haven't you posted this somewhere before? Either way..I enjoyed reading it a second time around. Your end thoughts always make me smile. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 really cool! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Smooth like Sven! Very nice indeed! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very cool Sven....I have been having thunder storms all day.... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, you need to open your mind more often if this is one of the interesting corners, because those corners should be held in the light of day. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
I won't say all this says to me... I'll just say thanks. [URL=http://www.heybroproductions.com |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thanks for the shower of smiles. Melton |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
So open your umbrella and walk between the raindrops back to your door. Nice Sven...good imagination. |
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