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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-05-13 07:14 AM


Just listen,
Do you hear the wind blowing?
Do you hear
Things so near,
What are those soft sounds showing,
See the sound
All around,
With noises taken all apart,
Bell ringing,
Bird singing,
The beating of your own heart;
Just listen
For the soft side of knowing.

Gloom


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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2003-05-13 07:18 AM


Oh, I liked this piece, Professor. I too, enjoy taking the time to stop and really listen to the sounds around me. Somehow, it keeps you grounded and makes you feel a part of all the wonders. You captured this beautifully. Much enjoyed this.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Justbleu
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2 posted 2003-05-13 08:40 AM


The sounds are quite beautiful sometimes....
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Nan
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3 posted 2003-05-13 10:17 PM


Stop, look & listen... I like this one, PG...
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