Open Poetry #26 |
Belly Button Zen (tanka lesson #11 for kaile) |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
searching for my Zen in seeking enlightenment it's not where I thought umbilical cord to soul who would have dreamed it was there [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (05-13-2003 02:33 AM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I know nothing of Tankas, and very little of Zen. But, I do know the quest for enlightenment. This would be a part of it, huh? |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
the title is cute!! and a wonderful message to not give up and look within yourself always, done with your typical wit and creativity..nicely done there... thanks for this write for me |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very nice! Eric |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
hmmm.... it does make sense in an umbilical sort of way... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ed, tanka is a 5-7-5-7-7 syllable form. Zen, well, that takes a bit more of an explanation. Just be you...here and now...in this very moment. kaile,, you're welcome, and thanks for the inspire Eric, thanks, friend. Nan, what a pleasure to have a reply from your quill! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kacy: Seeing the small is called Clarity. Keeping flexible is called Strength. Using the shining radiance you enter the Light, where no harm can come to you. This is called Enlightenment. - Lao Tsu hehe you got me on a kick here I love this xxoo |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Very nice tanka very much Charisma |
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