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Open Poetry #26

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icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2003-05-12 11:20 PM

The wind moves,
as I have moved it
a bell rings,
a thought shivers and awakes;
touch me
touch me not.

Walk with me
for a moment burning brightly,
lighting up the peasant's trail,
see the shadow
chase the dragon,
feel tomorrow's promised veil.

Time moves,
to stand rock still
life bubbles all around;
I am cold,
I feel my age
rings clear a warning;
touch me
touch me not.

The castle stands
long years abandoned,
its defenders sailing free
upon the waves of wonder
in a ship of fantasy.

©2003 by icebox

Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

1 posted 2003-05-12 11:46 PM

Enjoyed, fine write.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2003-05-12 11:48 PM

icebox

"I am cold,
I feel my age
rings clear a warning;
touch me
touch me not."

makes me recall my youth and the daisy of love's me
loves me not

but there is more...moves me

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2003-05-13 12:26 PM

Your bell rings clearly here. You've written in fine tones.

~wranx

"The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable"

~Bukowski~

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2003-05-13 12:52 PM

I enjoyed the read.....
Very nice!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2003-05-13 01:04 AM

"The wind moves as I have moved it" ... I sometimes think someone else is moving the wind around me but perhaps not. Perhaps the wind rises from somewhere deep inside to move and shake us "awake". An excellent write as usual, Icebox.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

6 posted 2003-05-13 01:38 AM

cryogenics anyone?
interesting write
brought my core temp down two degrees
and that might be good for me tonight

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2003-05-13 07:28 PM

Thank you all for taking the time to read and to comment. I appreciate it all very much.

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