Open Poetry #26 |
Cast The Die |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wrest but the life this wretched soul when once the die is cast to see. As drummers drum and death bells toll till ragged breath spills forth from me. Take from the palm of withered flesh the crumb and gruel fit not to eat. For on the ground, the cold wet earth a poor wretch stands on barren feet. Old shredded rags from shoulders stooped keep not the chilling night away. And shivers shake blue quivered lips until the dawn returns the day. A shadow mocks one’s destiny where death becomes struggles quest. As mud now binds the wrinkled toes in need of but a stolen rest. For in this cell and scornful place the bones of death do herein lie. Where buzzards soar till once the feast is dined by them with coal black eye. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Barry, now what do you suppose has crossed my mind as I read yet another brilliant write from your days of yore? ...yep! I knew you would know! You are the very best at what you do! Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wow... And dare I say, WOW! You know Barry, you keep this up, and Poe will be spinning in his wooded cell beneath the slick dark earth...Excellent. TD |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Whoa, extremly powerful write.. I like the medifores.. lol.. Nice work friend! Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Enjoyed!!!! Excellent write.... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, no-one else writes the way you do. Your writing keeps my eyes glued to the page, until I have finished. Then, it seems, I always go back and read again. Your writings are so beautiful, no matter what the subject. Hugs, Ethel |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
So well done,Barry!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love the classic language and ominous tone here, Mag. Reads like a warning... shivers and smiles. YES. Very well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Well that's what you get for looking in shadows, well done enjoyed. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I was lost to ancient times as I walked through the vision of your words...It was a magnificent walk....Your talent amazes me, dear friend... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I love the feel of this Barry..great writing |
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