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Of Laura's Song
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Of Laura's Song |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Of Laura's Song And the music takes me takes me until the darning of your leaf is to my air the song of Laura touching me there with tears caught in fold though my face not actress wed to role still the music takes me takes me (somewhere cold and spirit colored where she flew to Zhivago only a romantic movie true) across the meadow of my mind to fly to you with my song made from wind and sun and thinning skin only wanting here to be wrapped in you hovering to touch you with the weight of feel the midnight day of you on the slope of my skin sliding then into a love not film but real |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I knew the moment I saw the title that this had Zhivago written all over it! There is nothing better than Lara's Theme... and it's been a while since I've heard it... but here it is... in Martie's splendor! Thank you! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Lovely.....And kind of wistful!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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across the meadow of my mind to fly to you with my song made from wind and sun and thinning skin only wanting here to be wrapped in you hovering to touch you with the weight of feel the midnight day of you on the slope of my skin sliding then into a love not film but real ============================== SPLENDID..... OH YES!!! *sighing here* lovely...lovely..lovely.  You're the best I've ever felt ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Softly..gently..delicately penned, as only you can sweet poetess Martie. ~Hugs~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."somewhere my love, there will be songs to sing..." I love Lara's Theme and I enjoyed your lovely rendition of it...  Warm spring time hugs, Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (05-12-2003 09:06 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Boy, do I need to catch up with current old events.... sheesh! Nicely done dear lady... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
A beauty here. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
And the music takes me takes me You do well to speak of yourself as a song, because that is what you show yourself to be here. Every poem of yours sings, and this may be the clearest yet. We're lucky to have you, Martie, and if the subject of this song is real not whimsey, that one is luckier still than we are. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Magnificent pictures you paint with your words, m'friend... This is lovely...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie You always amaze me with your intricate blendings. Wonderful write.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Each time I read one of your poems I wonder if I was sleeping in English at school  this my friend is a definite piece for the library. (I'll call) |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Martie, The title brought me in and this makes me feel as though I'm floating in a bubble. Your poems are always loving, lovely and so heartwarming. I enjoyed this so very much. Huggles ... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Beautiful I must also agree... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
until the darning of your leaf is to my air the song of Laura touching me there I didn't know my eyes could hear... but reading your words, they do... and the melody is even more beautiful presented through your pen. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Yes ... what SuthernGal said .... doubled ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Good God, I think I was eleven the last time I heard that theme, time to get back in that rentaling phase, hockey playpffs are consuming TV time! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you take me places with your words and with your melody that I can't describe but you do!!! Paul |
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