Open Poetry #26 |
Silenced |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Silenced A week or so has come and gone, no longer do I have the words. Those easily that caught the wind are silent now, to not be heard. The chill has stayed, exchanged for warm of once what was, but now has left. The days turn night, in hours short to steal away, a lover's theft. The path has ended, throat is tight, the taste of you now bittersweet. The morning song drifts towards the sea, in tided pull of incomplete. On and on, and so it goes stepping back, a movement raised. I've lost the graded, failed the test, cannot conform to coated, glazed. A shadow's fate of reminisce submissive, not, to anyone. Voyeurized and tortured, pain an agony, of comfort, none. The other side of mirror, dread a perfect place to visit dreams. Turning from a nightmare's stead piecing gift of words with seams That tie together solace, found that hides outside Pandora's ills, locked to keep the inside pain that seeps through cracks, in tear-like spills. The time of then and those of now space the moments, mind in send. Besides the furthermore in thought, without, becomes a voice in end. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
There are many beautifully penned lines in here that my reader's eyes enjoyed.... hope you are feeling alright ... regards, sudhir |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just very tired, Sudhir. Thank you for the kindess of your words M |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Still expressed with depths of feeling , Maureen and very heartfelt Hope |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Full of emotion and beautifully expressed!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hope and Bridgette, thank you for stopping by. It's responses from friends that makes writing worthwhile and knowing, too that your feelings come across in words. hugsss M |
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