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El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-05-12 08:45 AM

In a dark hall sat a man
Alone at a piano
Slowly, majestically,
The music began to flow

The moon was the only light
Filling the hall with romance
Just think—It was in this place
That they had their last dance—

Hauntingly the canon sang
Sadly a lonely heart beat
A broken heart it was,
Who had come to know defeat

The music accelerated
As the heart sang itself out
Expressing through the music
All of the pain and the doubts

The tears and music flowed
Together becoming a stream
Reaching up heavenward
As a hurting soul’s last dream

But maybe this is where
Romance must always start,
Learning that sometimes love means
Accepting a broken heart,

Dying to dreams of romance
For the greater good of one
Who you love more than your dreams—
And then love has truly begun!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-05-12 09:03 AM

With my pita dosha, listening to Palchebels is just what an ayurvedic doctor would order!

Great write!

Love & Eternal Light,
EA

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

2 posted 2003-05-12 10:33 AM

Pachelbel's music is beautiful, and so is the magic you've weaved with this poem. Great one here, Benjamin.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

3 posted 2003-05-12 10:42 AM

Nice images, nice flowing poetry and then this
But maybe this is where
Romance must always start,
Learning that sometimes love means
Accepting a broken heart,

Dying to dreams of romance
For the greater good of one
Who you love more than your dreams—
And then love has truly begun!
-------- WONDERFUL...

thanks for sharing...

regards,
sudhir

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2003-05-12 12:26 PM

A deeply sad but beautiful write!!!!!
Very nice poetry poet sir!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2003-05-12 01:37 PM

This touched me deeply with its beauty and wisdom.
Very romantic scenery, with a surprise final.
Love, Margherita

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-05-12 01:38 PM

Pachelbel is just this...
and more...
and more so, in moonlight.

This is beautiful, sir...

Thank you.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-05-13 08:11 AM

Thats what I'm talking about...James

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-05-13 08:35 AM

El_Campeador
Wise and witty, well done, enjoyed.

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