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I'm Ready |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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Love me, sweet, and show me, tender, All the things that you can render To a heart of hearts that’s dying In the struggle of surviving. Hold my hand and relieve pressures With your eyes of ocean treasures. Fears were built by discontentment Of a world teaching resentment. Soak my tears with your compassion, In that warming, caring, fashion. Winds are still, but raindrops steady… Come and dance, I think I’m ready. - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (05-28-2003 12:30 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. I loved the words. They spoke to me. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Alyssa~ This is simply L O V E L Y ~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
loner, I'm honored that they do  thanks for replying.. its appreciated.Dixie, thank you for the beautiful Marge, so are you thank you.. you're always kind.Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nice rhymes here..and i liked the whimsical, childlike quality of this one |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
This was absolutely beautiful!  |
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