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MikeFessel
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since 2003-04-19

Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA

0 posted 2003-05-11 06:53 PM

Torn,
twisted feelings,
confused emotions.
Gripping, one takes hold
just to see another tear it away.

Feeling you are tossed?
Well I see too clear.
Would someone stike me blind?
I need to get away from here.

I offer you love,
but so does another.
You think you've got it bad?
Try standing over here.

You say to be patient,
that its the only way.
But love isn't patient,
love just is.

By Michael J Fessel

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-05-11 07:35 PM

Mike,

Yes, it just ~is~, so right.
Hugs, Pat

MikeFessel
Member

since 2003-04-19

Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA

2 posted 2003-05-11 07:39 PM

Thank you Pat,
I am so happy you enjoyed this

Hugs to you! Mike

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-12 04:39 AM

yes, it is...wonderfully done

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-05-12 07:44 AM

...Try standing over here
You said it so well, that it hurts even me ...
To ask to be patient in love is one of the most painful requests to endure ...
Love, Margherita

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

5 posted 2003-05-12 03:27 PM

This one really hurts.....
I wish we humans weren't so imperfect sometimes!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

MikeFessel
Member

since 2003-04-19

Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA

6 posted 2003-05-15 06:09 AM

Hi Passing shadows!
I am so glad you enjoyed this poem.

Mike

MikeFessel
Member

since 2003-04-19

Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA

7 posted 2003-05-15 06:12 AM

Margherita,
Yes it must be real fun reading my poems huh? Almost as fun as living the life that spawns them.

I'm sorry I caused you to feel pain. And I am glad to hear from you again. I'd love to be on here more often, but my life will not allow it at this time I am afraid.

Mike

MikeFessel
Member

since 2003-04-19

Posts 321
Brooklyn, NYC, USA

8 posted 2003-05-15 06:14 AM

Bridgette,
Sigh...yes. I know what you mean.

You are so kind to look in on so many of my poems and comment on them. I just want you to know I am very grateful that you take a little time out of your life for me

Mike

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