Open Poetry #26 |
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Adieu |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York ![]() |
Tick tock the clock STOP! Pitter patter incessant chatter Drip . . .drip . . . drip . . . I sip cold water to my lips The rise of his cheeks fell today He decided it was time. He closed his eyes today and died . . . I bring hand to face beg for something to replace this sadness utter madness of quiet |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I'm sorry all i can offer is Hugs and hope you feel better |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A heartfelt poem, a tribute of love. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm sorry for your loss. ~Heart Hugs~ |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I wish for you the understanding and the comfort only time can bring. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OH, how terribly sad this one is, and all I can say is, I'm so sorry! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
My eyes are full of tears for you as is my heart. I am deeply sorry for your loss. -Patricia |
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Frank Tymon Junior Member
since 2003-05-11
Posts 27California, USA |
There is no forgetting. Sometimes, tears bring relief. Sometimes, recall of the happy memories. And, truly, we rarely want to forget Warm memories are often a blessing. Frank Tymon |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A very gentle sadness. I am sorry for your loss. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This strikes me do deeply. Love, Eric |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is so very heartfelt, dearest friend, my heart cries out to your loss but know always that he will always remember you and be blessed to have you as a true friend forever and always guide from above with sunshine! (wipes tears) This is very heartachingly beautiful, sweet friend, we all send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shien upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - too sad for the lady with a smile... BC |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I search for words that do not come I can only say - I haven't prayed in a very long time but today - I prayed for you & your family - and I will continue to pray throughout the days ahead |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I too am sorry for your loss. I don't know what to say except that I'm here if you someone. Heart Hugs to you, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my... ![]() |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely written It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
hug you |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Oh littlewing, I am so sorry for your loss ... I'm sure he was the most wonderful man... He had to be... he knew you... I'd like to think of how much joy you will bring him through the pure beauty of all your heartfelt words... And, of your heartfelt thoughts... in the coming days... and years... Blessings to him, and to you, and to everyone, who's life he touched... Most Sincerely, Richy |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph - that is much more than you realize sweety thank you - you know I need hugs Sun - thank you - much love yes Nancy - you dear thing - thank you ice - yes . . . only time - thank you ahh Kacy - yeah - well - you know how it goes . . .thank you so so much - too sweet to me truly Pat - how very sweet of you - please dont cry - its ok - thank you Frank - how beautiful and yes - warm memories are angels in disguise - thank you Thank you Chris very heartfelt Ericc - so so sweet you are - *smiling* thank you Noah - you said it - will just take some time for me to believe it happened thank you for being so kind Bill - so so sweet to me you are - *smile* there - there was a smile thank you dream - so so sweet, my friend - *smiling* I actually got you to pray? lol thank you Ethel - you are so gracious to offer you rhand to me - I am lucky to have such friends thank you Dixie - exactly what I said . . . thank you Q - thank you Bri - hugs you back . . . thank you Richy - so sweet your words - and yes he was the most loving man - but is in peace - and *smiling* your comments make me feel ok about all of it - I thank you for being so sweet I wrote this in anger and pain - my uncle- who raised me, died suddenly of a heart attack - nasty hand to a good man but now he is in peace and in a much better place than all of us are now. This I know in my heart. How lucky I am to have such beautiful people here - holding out thier hands for me to grasp. Thank you everyone truly Sorry for the rambling . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-12-2003 07:54 PM).] |
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