Open Poetry #26 |
Ponderous Whistles The Wind |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Could I know with any certainty the destination of this dream? Then perhaps the whistling miles would be thicker than they seem Then perhaps the narrow canyons that have been so hard to walk Could I know there is an outcome to this venture that I stalk? And perhaps as May arrives on the winds of gales might Then again to clear the clouds away and keep the sun in sight Could I know what guides the wisdom of the choices to be made? Then perhaps as May arrives, impatience soothed on summer’s blade Then again would something different have detoured the path in front? Could I see the steps more clearly to the outcome that I want? Could there be another morning that would clear my mind again? Could I know with any certainty the victory till then? Copyright Kkh 5/11/03 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lots of perhaps...and what ifs....and a ton of hope to carry them to their destination in the decisions of life.. Nicely done Kay... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond Enjoyed reading the write. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD...beautiful questioning poem. Love this form! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very creative and beautiful! Eric |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
This is deep. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a definite thinker |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
TD, as always, very enjoyable and insightful... Destination’s certainty comes hardly for a dream The obstacles put forth ahead are more then most would deem Choices at the crossroads always leave us with misdoubt Leave some crumbs of bread behind in case the bridge is out... Take Care, Richy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your whispered ponderances carry on the winds and into the minds and hearts of your readers... Warm hugs, Linda |
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