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Forgive Me (Dedicated To My Boyfriend)
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Forgive Me (Dedicated To My Boyfriend) |
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Aya Junior Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 42New Zealand |
As i said this is to my boyfriend, i hurt him and i never meant to and so i wrote this poem for him, its my latest peice and so i hope that he is going to like it..... Forgive me for all the wrongs I have done Forgive me for what I said Forgive me for not knowing what to say my love Forgive me for hurting you instead I never seem to get it right, I always seem to stuff it up I never know what to say sweetheart I just never want us to part I have been thinking about what I have done to you Over the past few days I have been thinking about how I have hurt you baby How I wish I never did hurt you in such a way Looking back on what I have done How I have caused you pain I want to take back all the things I have said Take back all the strain But I can never take it back Life just hasnt given me that pleasure I can never right that wrong I can only learn from it and be better To be with you is what matters the most To be by your side is what I love most Holding you, loving you caressing you dear I know if I lost you it would be more then I could bear As I finish this poem I look up to the sky Seeing a shooting star as it flies by I make a lone wish upon that one star And hope that some day your love wont be so far. [This message has been edited by Aya (05-11-2003 06:10 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Aya, this is very very beautiful. I am sure your boyfriend will melt to your heartfelt words. Forgiveness is a wonderful means to allow love to bloom again. Good luck .... well the shooting star provided! Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 good write, very touching |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We all need to ask for forgiveness at some time...and asking for forgiveness indicates a soft heart to me...and thats always good to have...James |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I hope your dreams come true.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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