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My Soldier
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My Soldier |
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JingleBear Member
since 2003-05-08
Posts 76Pennsylvania, USA |
The night is dark and heavy like a deep black hole covering the soldiers who have been levied With the battle location unknown I pray for my soldier's survival hoping my forever is not spent alone These drops from my eyes burn through my skin straight to the heart but will not create my demise Hope for later days when my soldier will come home and show his affection in many ways Wonder of his whereabouts and adapted living enclosed in wretched hideouts He must know the pain of want and how I love him so --For everyone waiting for their soldier to return |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very well written, It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, this one really hurts. I pray for all the troops. Thank you for sharing your heart with us. Hugs, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 beautiful! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Heartfelt.... HUGS, Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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