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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2003-04-16 12:42 PM

What it was –

two desperate shadows
in the dark act,
forming vase-faces

a wretched dance,
the dips and twists
of misery

sunk lower
in depressions left
behind.

© 2003 Core

[This message has been edited by Corinne (04-16-2003 12:47 PM).]

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2003-04-16 01:44 PM

A wondrous portrait of amphorae settled into the dust of time...Still wearing the glazes of the past.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-04-16 01:45 PM

Now! you have caught my imagination
as I am trying to see what you see
in a vase face...

a multi-layered write...this....

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-04-16 02:56 PM

There is strength in this, to confront and write of the act and to post it.. Though perhaps I'm way off in my interpretation of this,(too many horror stories in my circle of friends) it's a powerful write in small package brilliant as always Corinne.

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

4 posted 2003-05-13 10:27 AM

Good write....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2003-05-13 12:33 PM

this cries out for a picture of thought. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2003-05-13 08:50 PM

I've read this a couple of times already - Going back for another...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-05-18 01:29 AM

(sigh) That's certainly what it was, now only imagine what it could be now as the lunar eclipse cancels out! (big hugggsssssss) Wonderfully sketched, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shien upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-05-18 04:41 AM

cool write...I can sure relate

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