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Walked Away
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Walked Away |
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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England 
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Another day down I can’t seem to turn my life around I need you But you don’t care I want you to notice I took the colour away for you I thought that was what you wanted I guess I was wrong You don’t notice When I’m gone And I am I’ve gone away I took myself I’ve never walked so far So fast Steady And now I’m lost I’ve never been here before But you made me Need to go away I wonder if you’ve noticed I wish I didn’t care I wish that you had wanted Me to be there But you didn’t So I’m gone And I am I’ve gone away I took myself I’ve never walked so far So fast Steady And now I’m lost I’ve never been here before But you made me Need to go away Can’t you just see I miss you I don’t want to be Where you’ve made me put myself I’m writing again But these aren’t real words They were But you took that with you I’ve gone away I took myself I’ve never walked so far So fast Steady And now I’m lost I’ve never been here before But you made me Need to go away. And I don't want the world to see me 'Cause I don't think that they'd understand When everything's made to be broken I just want you to know who I am |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
These words have a pace that hits and the pain is felt. Very impressive. May there be a reason to walk back as fast and steady! Love, Margherita |
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P.R.C Junior Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 40Hull, England |
well done rosie! yet another great one from you! YAY!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rm711 Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England |
thank you all very much I just want something,One thing,Can’t you let me have someone,Anyone,Just for me,And this is what I seem to be,To everybody,Your last resort |
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Frank Tymon Junior Member
since 2003-05-11
Posts 27California, USA |
The misery of invisibility. And little left to do, but walk away. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
So sad.... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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