Open Poetry #26 |
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Fall of '63...Blue and Gray |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Morning comes slowly into the haze of fires and fog intermingling against a backdrop of forest and hill. Death sleeps.. Tinkle of tin on spoon awakes the aroma of stirred grounds laced with copious heaps of sugar...the edge to kill stirs the bowels... The twinkle of stars through thin openings lend a false sense of haven as the roll of iron shod wheels bring to bear the black round death, the chain that gives no quarter and apologizes not to friend or foe. Fall of ‘63 and blue meets gray as boys become men or die in a hail of steel and lead. Moans will drown the burst of cannon fire as shrieks chill the bone and bring the shiver to a neck’s nape. Reap the field of war, reap the field of corn reap the field afar as soldiers stand and mourn. [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-10-2003 02:50 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn, you took me there... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Twas the goal Dixie...twal the goal... thank you... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssssss) Oh Barry, this is so very heartaching, dearest friend, it saddens me to know how all who went there got disrespect from everyone and now many of their lives are not the same anymore having to be surrounded by the shame and lack of honor! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
My vision opened up to accept all that your words showed me and I wept for the suffering I saw yet I rejoiced in the freedom that so many lives were spent to gain....STUNNING...ABSOLUTELY STUNNING...You write visions of purity and clarity, dear friend....Never stop following the direction your heart and talent takes you for you follow a path that shines with a gift most rare.... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Barry, Such is true; you've no problem creating imagery...awesome write! So glad you are back. I would like to have an entire book of your work. Enjoyed, Pat ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There is a resonance in your poetry, as the resonance of souls on the battlefield... The images rise and beckon to look further...across the meadow. Well done Mag. TD |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
And so we reap what we sow, over and over again. I heard the battle cries, and wept. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very well done Maggie....down here we called it the "The War Of Northern Aggression"....LOL....The south's gonna do it again!!.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your star just keeps on shining!--and yet even more brightly! ![]() ![]() Luvin' hugs, EA |
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