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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I admit There's alot going on in my mind I feel redundant most of the time No wait let me rephrase that ALL of the time You see You pretty much Caught me off guard And we both know I've been emotionally scarred To the point Of no return I bought a one way ticket Somewhere between When I found myself waking up But I fell back asleep Comfortable in my own frame of mind Comfortable on the hard cold floor Of everything going wrong Medicated coddling Doesn't help I just overdose on the tears When I've had enough I don't mean to drown In my own sea of emotions But can't you see Can't you understand I'm starting to relax When I'm around you I think I'm getting too close for comfort And that I just might have to run away again Because honestly I'm hoping That this connection we got going on Is for real... [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (05-10-2003 01:18 PM).] |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ah...there is hope wrapped up in your words...Do not run from what might be as you will end up spending the rest of your life wondering "What Might Have Been" Let the heart relax that some healing may begin...heartfelt writing... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kristen, This is quite touching and captured what many of us have felt at one time or another. Well written feelings. Hugs, Pat  [This message has been edited by regards2you (05-10-2003 01:22 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I know this..the urge to run away from some sense of happiness or content because there's a sick comfort in sadness and pain when it's all you've known for so long |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow, I thought you were writing about me here...wonderfully sad write |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris: mann you said it all . . . know this too wish I didnt but hey . . . thats life Is kind of like change becomes scary when you are so comfortable being in this skin for far too long - I call when I feel like this "icky" there is just no other way to describe it - like you can just feeeel the film on your skin but really dont or have no way to remove it Brilliant write Kris xxoo |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
If the last couple of poems of your's that I've read are recent, then you style really seems to have changed...I really like it though. You've always had a better grasp of exactly what you want to project than I have and I'm envious of that...great job. Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ceinwyn - You have said it well, has the other person read this? If not, they should... BC |
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