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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-05-10 06:33 AM


Thrill of Her
Cold Hard Steel (X2)

As I kissed
her moistened lips
my hands slid down
to her fingertips
to feel the thrill
of her cold hard steel.

Promise not to hold me too
tight Lady Deathstrike.
Other than that do
with me what
you will.

JamesLee
May10
2003
X2
Hawaii born Kelly Hu
plays Lady Deathstrike.



© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2003-05-10 06:44 AM


Lots of interesting ideas and images to be conjured up from this write James....I enjoyed the thought stimulation.....
Nice writing!

Eric

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 2003-05-10 08:31 AM


Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-05-10 06:29 PM


Thank you ethome and Bridgette for the nice responses...James
AniKay83
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4 posted 2003-06-09 06:30 AM


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As I kissed
her moistened lips
my hands slid down
to her fingertips
to feel the thrill
of her cold hard steel.
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Ahhh... I love reviving old posts, but not nearly as much as I love James!
If you happen to see this little revival, then you'll be rewarded with some info.
The poem I posted a loooong time ago titled 'A Few Words from James' was written based upon my admiration for your poetry. Tie that in with 'the few words' you always leave in reply...and you get ....well... 'A Few Words from James'!

BTW, I love X-Men! I'm a HUGE anime fan, but flip for Marvel & D.C., too. I've recently began 'The Uncanny X-Men' from the very beginning. (It'll be quite a feat to read it all considering it goes to #400 and something, then all the side stories, not to mention that isn't actually the beginning of the ORIGINAL X-Men such as Havoc & Polaris, etc. {SORRY!!! Just the ramblings of a fan, it would be soooo much worse in person!})

Cool write. Later.

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unwindyormind
VIVA
LA FUNK!!!

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-06-09 11:45 PM




(smiles) Oh James, this is so wickedly delightful, sweet friend, someone must have seen X2 recently! LOL! (big hugggsssssss) That was a great movie, now onto X3 and find out how the Saga of the Dark Phoenix goes, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2003-06-09 11:48 PM


James - nice my friend, very nice...

BC

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

7 posted 2003-06-10 12:50 PM


YIKES!!! :-)
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-06-10 04:22 AM


wow
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