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one third inch |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I woke. I found my Paxil there, right next to the remote control. and my lighter's one third inch of fingertips drove me to despair. I watched the info-mercials logging in my time thinking that this just might be a bio-rhythm--or something... I woke. I found my cigarettes, right next to the remote control. and my lighter's one third inch of fingertip drove me--down,despaired. I stared the pale of patches logging me in time... thinking that this just might be a guidepost pointing somewhere... I woke. I found myself alone right next to the remote control holding tighter one third inch reaching for the telephone... I stared into the pages logging time of friend thinking that this just might be a day beginning somewhere...else... I woke. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (05-10-2003 07:48 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Karen? I dont know if this was your vision but what a lovely start to my day that this may be a day beginning somewhere . . . yes . . . it is - I can feeeel it Such insight - this is full of hope . . . I love this K xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-10-2003 05:25 AM).] |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Beautifully written -- a study in desolation delivered in a classically executed poetic envelope. I could feel every minutehour of it.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do make the seconds s t r e t c h don't you? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Seems like a well written short curcuit to me. LOL  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
time to throw away the bic? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! You do take the reader right there! Great write...wonderful insight. ~Hugs~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
give a moth an inch and she will learn to fly? (ykikyk)  |
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