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Open Poetry #26

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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2003-05-09 01:46 PM

                                               flame
                                             of
                                          ghost
                                           drifts
                                         drift...
                                        in acrid
                                      the same
                                       one
                                   present
                                  and
                                   past
                               forsaken,
                                 those
                                mesmerizing
                             heaven's taken,
                            to
                         unseen
                      force
                          by
                        shape...
                     mystic
                      smoke's
                      slow,
                   dancing
                 curling,
               lingered
                in
            drift
          pugent
           scape,
            land's
        cross
stairstepping
swirling,
    fingered
   in
   smoke
  of
wisp

[This message has been edited by Tim (05-09-2003 01:52 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-05-09 01:47 PM

wow! just wow!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-05-09 01:58 PM

Ingenuity...
and form.

Well done, Sir!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2003-05-09 02:10 PM

Absolutely...

sort of mystically enticing--

a curling finger beckoning, as appropriate, by the name.

Quite a different thang from you!

I like this very much!

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