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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Disclosure : Just a vent in general not addressed to anyone or anything in particular..just blame it on the depressing love songs.. I don't know if I could ever quite begin To comprehend The dreams The thoughts That have been pulsating Within my veins And Right through my very existance I don't want to assume Nor do I want to jump right into This feeling of security I used to believe In destiny And that everything happens for a reason But why Is this happening? I've been thrusted Into the angel's embrace More times then often I admit I still have nightmares In my waking dreams I hide and cower In the deepest corner of my mind Back to the mentality of that small Abused child Believe me I don't mean to run When I just want to be held Just hold me Just never ever Give up on me When I run away Back into the past Force yourself upon me Slake my insecurities Carry me over the threshold of disappointments Purge me of the pain Just lie down beside me In my dreams And hold me close Because I'm scared To let go of these emotions To let go in general Give me your support To this aching contradiction That plunges deep into my heart, mind, body, spirit and soul Just please never ever let go Because I need you right now More than you'll ever know [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (05-09-2003 01:34 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Kristen, I do know what you feel here.  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very full of emotion here..... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris: oooohhh do I ever know this . . . I once wrote about this too but here you spill your soul and not one of us will watch you fall - always remember it is ok to falter - we are human and once in awhile dust the dirt off look in the mirror - fix your hair and realize that YOU are the one who has come out a winner in the end - no matter the pain - here? shows growth . . . amazing write xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-09-2003 06:14 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
and she says she hasn't been able to write lately..grin Awesome writing Kris don't ever stop |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristen, so many can relate to this just as I can, dearest friend, I have been abused and wronged before and I just want to be as fair as possible to everyone but I also don't want to be contorted and have to run into that crawlspace again like that same scared boy! (wipes tears) I send healing angel hugs your way, sweet friend, know we are all here for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I truly admire the way you just "skinned yourself" in this write--that takes courage, and it is a painful method at that. This is a bold, "balls-out" display of raw emotion. I applaud. |
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