Open Poetry #26 |
With Dawn comes the Rain |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The wind strolls beside me Pushing along the light debris On my back and through my hair, The clouds gather on the end, The sky’s edge horizon, Plotting some disturbing air As the sun peeks out below Then hides in the cloud flow As some sky tries to brighten, Trying so hard to become light To come from the deep of night More clouds come rushing in. A bus stops just up the way Convoying workers into the day From home and sleepy dreams; The rain begins in earnest pour As I pause at a canopied door And watch the forming streams. The wind follows me yet Now blowing to make me wet So I step out into the lane Accepting the wind and rain. Gloom |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Cool.... Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes we have to suck it up and step into the storm. Well done, Sir... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
I like the imagery and the message. Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, i know this |
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