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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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He said, “Write hot, and gritty,” I thought of Fire and sand So. When I did? I got glass. I could now eyeball the world with new distortion, thus developing a feel for Monet. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling)...Monet huh.... sure it is not a pointillistic view? Numerous individual dots in an independent coalition creating the impression as opposed to the brush strokes? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh sure, go ahead and bend my brain a little more why don'cha?  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I believe Claude would have appreciated your 'impression' of his paintings!  Love, Life & Art! Linda |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This made me smile...hot and gritty is certainly open to interpretation.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Damn, Goob thought it was time for breakfast!!!!  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
He said, “Write hot, and gritty,” I thought of Fire and sand So. When I did? I got glass. I could now eyeball the world with new distortion, thus developing a feel for Monet. Excellent as always m'friend...enjoyed the humour here. Hmm perhaps I've misinterpreted. Made me smile ya did. Maree  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 How Clever! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Definitely hot and gritty and perhaps even steamy.  Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write "K" It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
loved this self-portrait |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A smile comes to my face as I take joy in the talent you have with words...A total joy is the work of your pen to read.... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Love the title, not sure I understand the poem though! But it certainly was interesting. Huggles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I thought of Fire and sand So. When I did? I got glass. ============================ and we got poetry... very very cool poetry. Like this unique style on you... clever and creative perspective poetess of the sun.  Monet is smiling and so is the moth. to Rons reply I say......... HUH????  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Hmmmm...Glass? Well, next time, a little less heat, a little less fire, a little more sand and cut down on the flux of artistry and I think it will still be separate unrelated elements when you are done. Not this time though. *smile* |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
How cool! I really love this poem. Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think that glass may be crystal... for this sparkles with every twist and turn. *G* |
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