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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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Suspicions that there’s no niche for me Have become my belief I search for attitude improvement But I find no relief So I now hold a one way ticket To a world lacking light A brief glimpse forth is more than enough To fold my knees with fright Yet still I board a downward spiral Where there’s no place to hide Perhaps a few speed bumps might save me But someone waxed the slide [This message has been edited by suthern (05-08-2003 03:11 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Werk? LOL...ah gal, I had to chuckle at the last, just when I was beginning to say oh how sad! You jerked a giggle! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*smiling* this is awesome . . . yes . . . I do agree FULLY nice write xxoo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I tried to pick out a line or two I liked, but it all touched me. Want company? I think I am going your way... hugs M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I just fluffed up my aura and wings and I'm comin' to save ya darlin'! I'll be there faster than you can say Deuterotomy! Look for a blue streak in the sky--No, I'm not Superman--his streak is a much deeper blue with some red mixed in!  Put the tea on! We're going to do some serious chatting! Healing hugs, EA |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Ruth, This one, in spite of the wax job, put a tear in my eye. Thinking of you, heart hugs and love, Pat  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Aww Ruth my friend, if I lived where you are I would give ya a big HUG!! Be well and keep smilin', Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh I hear ya Ruthie girl--- As the song goes..... "I shaved my legs for this??????" *smiling at the poetic sardonic wit of your last lines* well...me thinks its gonna be one hell of a party at the bottom...we will be in good company thats for sure.   |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ouch! Had times like that, yes a few, where your biggest entertainment is watching to see how bad it'll get.... Well written -- can't say I enjoyed the poem, but did relish the way you captured such an unenjoyable feeling. Some things ain't to be enjoyed! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
LOL...great write!!! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Darn, and I thought I'd hidden the wax really carefully. Back to werk womyn! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Even in the "bleak" times, you keep a sense of humor, fine suthern lady... This is a fine write... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
suthern...you write this feelings so well...can I offer a hug and a hand? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
that's why I always have a pillow for these kinds of things. . . great work my friend. . . keep that pillow handy!!! ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuthernGal~  Well, you're certainly 'waxing' poetic in this piece~Better come join me on the merry-go-round ... TWO dizzy blondes on a whirly-gig ... now what's poetic about THAT ?  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah suthern, this isn't like you...we're down here to catch you, so don't worry. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I hope you'll forgive the blanket response. *S* I thank each and every one of you so much for your wonderful comments! Thank you!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Suthern, we all send angel hugs your way, dearest friend, with me and all the friends you have here the world can never feel bleak as all suspicions will become certainties and superstitions just miracles! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is most honestly said, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Suthern, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
M'toe: Thank you so much for your kind response... and more so for your big heart. *S* |
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