Open Poetry #26 |
Thousand Beats of Yesterday |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A thousand beats of yesterday in tune to a song once sung. A time of moon rises, sunsets on shimmering seas washing a sandy shore. Memories held within a beating heart. Feel the breeze that flutters, feel the touch that causes pause. Feel the shudder of passion... Warmth of a pillow resting silently in wait for once again... Today the vine curls upward... Tomorrow the grape ripens as tender lips brush in waiting thirst.... Come....drink the vintage of love aging....aged love... As a new day rises upon the last ray of a silver moon’s set. [This message has been edited by Magnus (05-07-2003 09:02 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
See the free verse of this float high... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Superb... A very good year. TD |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* I thought you had woven magic before but this STUNNING poem spins a web of such beauty that it takes the breath away and leaves me in awe of the wonder that is you....I LOVE IT!!! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful piece, so very beautiful I enjoy the flowing air in your work Makes me feel warm inside like when the sun shines on your face in the morning light. Julie |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
Wowee...that's all I have to say.... +Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - nice my friend, very nice... BC |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry... "Today the vine curls upward... Tomorrow the grape ripens" You can do it all...and well! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry Another beautiful piece from your heart. It is so nice to be able to read your words again. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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