Open Poetry #26 |
Storm Chaser |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Storm Chaser I must be a storm chaser why else would I behave this way pulled to a force of disturbance that excites and electrifies all pores an assault of my emotion penetrating commotion squalls down wind changing calm to tempest rain on me, rain on me swirling jets of thunder clouds for when the dust settles I find a new creation |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's exactly what a good storm will do... create a new anything... but most especially beginnings. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There is heat in a storm...and a cleansing afterwards. You words strike deeply. Eric |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wanna start a club? I could so relate to this! |
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ptwils165 Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 50 |
yes, something swept me up here. pete. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
A beautiful read that I for one can relate. alan |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A little humor, a lot of insight....I like that very much. ::::serenity -- can I join your club? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I wanted to see some of those yesterday. . . great work helen. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A good storm terrifies and holds us in awe at the same time...well done, Helen.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write, ladybug you know I'm with ya |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I'll tell you a secret: I have been known to go outside at the height of a hurricane and play my echo harp (a type of harminica) in the storm. It absolutely is a fatal attraction! I LOVE IT!!!! Thank you for setting it to verse. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I love what you've done with this. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Lost_Soul Junior Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 37California, United States |
Good write. I know exactly what you mean. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) That is the true benefit of storms, nothing is ever the same afterward them and even when there is always risk of destruction and distortion, sometimes it is better off when you want reform! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shien upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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