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Listen...........Tanka
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Listen...........Tanka |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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Listen to silence within solitary tear sorrow from the past shaped upon shattered deep blue roots convey seeds of freedom ~*Theresia~* |
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j-oh-E Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 59Texas, USA |
I like your picture... Your poem's even better!!! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Charisma, this is a very soothing read. It has a delicate flow. Thank you. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
...roots convey seeds of freedom. A lovely write. TD |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah listening is an art... and to hear the silence and let it bring forth new seeds... indeed.... enjoyed this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearSweetCharisma~ It is always a treat to read your lovely Tanka's~ This is BEAUTIFUL~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) You are sooooooo right, sweet friend, this is lovely and through the tears we cry may we find answers and comfort! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
simply beautiful! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I tanka for the Tanka. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Love the way this one feels ROOTED firmly to the truth |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Kethry is just too inventive today. . . lol excellent work my friend. . . you need to show me how you do this. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
j-oh-E: thank you. Decaflame:Thank you for your kind words. ThisDiamond: thank you for the lovely Ron: so glad you enjoyed Marge: thank you beautiful lady for reading Noah: Thank you for your always uplifting words, always a pleasure to see you around vandana:thank you passing shadows: thank you Kethry: tanka very much for stopping by Midnitesun: you know it, thank you for your kind comment Sven: Thank you dear friend, and I think that you will become a wonderful tanka writer. So looking forward to one of yours |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"roots convey seeds of freedom" made me cry with that, y'did. That sums up the whole of my (once) ongoing argument with him. Hugs you...thanks for this! (and perhaps someday, he and I will resume the discussion.) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma Enjoyed, thank you. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Listen to silence indeed - It surely speaks... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Touching truths so sweetly whispered...  Warm hugs, Linda |
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