Open Poetry #26 |
flying in a bluish dream |
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
the escapist lives a never-satisfied dream of wanting to be somewhere else always and he is forever climbing down from his steps of assumed miseries into another definition of depth but some escapists are also dreamers of fantastic and expansive beauties and they are wide-eyed butterflies exotic, bright and colourfully hued fluttering in their forever dips -------- did i write that? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
colors...it is all about colors... and you have shown us yours... I enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!!! Beautiful! Love the 'steps' as well... You do continue to soar Sudhir! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Ahh...very nice!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sudhir - yes you did write it and glad you did know this feeling well. my friend xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is a great escape in every sense of the word, a dream within dream. I enjoy your writing so much Sudhir~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
did [you] write this? ~*~ here's wishing I had... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sudhir, Such a talented poet. I love this. Hugs, Pat |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done...much enjoyed.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Wonderful! wonderful writing Sudhir! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nicely done indeed !! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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j-oh-E Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 59Texas, USA |
I liked reading this one out loud. Excellent! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This colorful escapee from your quill is great! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SudhirMyFriend~ 'some escapists are also dreamers' I think you just painted ME ~ Lovely thoughts, dear poet~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir...A meaningful poem, colored with deep thought. |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
I enjoyed this. Nice work. quatro |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sudhir, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you truly ar eone of these butterflies that have monarch freckled smiles that can bring smiles to any flower! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is delightful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
to escape from the world of work is to work the world of words and to relax in the knowing that our words have the small slender chance to bring peace, serenity and meaning to atleast a few readers ----------------- thank you all for your magnificently kind remarks... for your time, for your much appreciated thoughts... for your beauty... regards, sudhir |
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