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Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

0 posted 2003-05-07 02:19 AM

Freedom
As I slowly speak out loud
to taste the sense within
Of so simple word
As freedom

Why does
it overwhelm me
With melancholy?
Or do I still sence fragrance
of blood

Why do I still hear the cry
Of warriors from elsewhere
Fighting for their rights
Giving their lives
For Freedom?

Right of every human being
But many aren’t allowed
To breathe the fragrance
Of so costly word
As freedom

Freedom
A small simple word
But it contains much more
More than history ever holds
'cause it's a part of every soul

So please cherish always
the freedom from within
'cause without doing that
you can't fight for
Freedom

~*Theresia~*

Revised from Holiday cheer

[This message has been edited by Charisma (05-07-2003 02:23 AM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-05-07 05:49 AM

Enjoyed...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-05-07 06:31 AM

Charisma, a good read, straight from the heart!

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

3 posted 2003-05-07 06:51 AM

Well done. It is sad that in all of human history freedom is one thing which has never been free.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-05-07 07:23 AM

it's always the little words that get us..like..freedom or love or hate... always

enjoyed...

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

5 posted 2003-05-07 10:56 AM

so very well said...

thanks for sharing...

regards,
sudhir

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-05-07 11:05 AM

Charisma ~

So true! So heartfelt! So poetic!

Wonderful poem!

Let freedom ring!

Peace, Love, & Light,
EA

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2003-05-07 11:06 AM

Charisma - yes, freedom is worth it, worth fighting for no matter what...

BC

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-05-07 11:32 AM

Theresia:

But many aren’t allowed
To breathe the fragrance
Of so costly word
As freedom

you got it
nice write xxoo

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-05-07 11:23 PM

(sigh) Oh Charisma, this is so very true, sweet friend, I think too many fail to recognize the golden rule of freedom and that only creates chain effects of despair in others! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2003-05-08 12:25 PM

well said my friend. . . words for us all. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

11 posted 2003-05-08 12:56 PM

So please cherish always
the freedom from within
'cause without doing that
you can't fight for
Freedom

A thought filled with much wisdom. Nice job of writing. I enjoyed this very much.

Huggles, Marti

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