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Open Poetry #26

angels and eris

Starsfalling
Member

since 2003-03-18

Posts 94
some where deep in the shadows

0 posted 2003-05-06 11:51 PM

i feel this change,
and it shocks and warms
sends a jolt of feeling through my body
my heart once more beats,
beats to the rythm of your step
you glide past and i hear bells,
soon following is the angels that sing..
a pillar of light surrounds your every move
everything you are is pure
even the goddess eris, as fair as can be
grows ever jealous,
her obsession
her delusion
she is nothing and you are everything
you've sung a tale,
of love and grand wishes
one in which i could lose myself..
if i havent already

not my best on the flow side but i liked the feelings when i wrote it
-lance

There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-05-06 11:52 PM

Starsfalling - the feelings come through with your pen in this write...

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-05-07 05:37 AM

Enjoyed...James

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-05-07 10:52 AM

Stars:

Sounds like a perfect falling in love.

Enjoyed, Pat

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-05-07 11:51 AM

---love's freefall so delightfully expressed!

Warm hugs,
EA

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-05-07 11:59 AM

lance:

this is amazing
I love the angels singing
reminds of Verdi . . .
xxoo

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