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Haiku birds on branches
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Haiku birds on branches |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
filling in the lines, birds paint colorless branches leaves remain silent |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I enjoyed this alot! |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
Pretty! Love reading all these great writes. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Neat! The more I read it the more I like it. Couple levels here... Very good, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Excellent view, superb imaging! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Nicely done! All writing comes |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice! Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now this one made me think. So I went back and then rethought it! Interesting and quite imaginative piece of writing! Have a lovely evening, EA |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I like this.... Good job!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Wow...thanks to all of you. I appreciate your kind words and encouragement. I seem to have an easier time writing haiku and hopefully I will continue as the spirit or inspiration moves me. Bless you all! |
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