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Open Poetry #26

I Let Go

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-05-06 01:15 PM

I Let Go

you are one man
that I will never forget

not one feeling or word
shall I ever regret

letting go of something
is a struggle of breath I drew

hearts have problems letting
something slip, they are attached to

your good bye is leaving
me tangled up inside

I run but empty spaces
have nothing to hide

I am weary, I can not fight
no more words of protest

as acid eats me
I let go, as you request

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-05-06 02:34 PM

1slick_lady
Well done, letting go is but starting again.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-05-06 02:38 PM

Agreeing with Sy...
An open palm means
new adventures...

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

3 posted 2003-05-06 02:42 PM

Powerful dwindling void Helen.

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2003-05-06 02:53 PM

"I let go, as you request"

but twas the request you have made.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

5 posted 2003-05-06 02:59 PM

powerful powerful....sigh...and yes, the letting go is but the first step of going on....hard as it is....

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