the only time you'll see me criticize fairytales :) (I do love them!)

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Open Poetry #26

the only time you'll see me criticize fairytales :) (I do love them!)

wings of the moon
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since 2003-03-27

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0 posted 2003-05-06 11:43 AM

They like to think as heroes do
Gladly with swords, slaughter the shrew
But of the baddies no one cares,
How the wicked witch was once so fair.

They save pretty princesses,
From perishable flames,
Cut heads and hardness
To make beauty the winner.

But never seem to side with the ugly,
In the fairytales all’s fair.
And the wicked witch is always evil
For it is said, so thats for sure.

regards2you
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1 posted 2003-05-06 05:29 PM

I like this. See the point. I also like being a poetess for I can write my own fairy tales...how about you?

(I know you could just by having read this)

Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

wings of the moon
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since 2003-03-27

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2 posted 2003-05-07 05:40 AM

aww thank you Pat,

I do enjoy writting fairytales too, what a wonderful and ugly world it is

love,
claire

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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