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Open Poetry #26

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LastMoments
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 92

0 posted 2003-05-05 08:37 PM

Where did my wings go
They fell away to ashes
As everything around me broke
And turned to opposite tides

Why did denial attach me
To the ground I stand
Lending me to shards of emptiness
That dig underneathe my skin

Burying illusions of misplacement
In the dark mists of my mind
Tasting the sorrow in the tears
That drift rivers along my face

Why do you drag this pain
Push the needles to my heart
Make the loneliness grow
As I'm different to those around

And alone to myself.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2003-05-05 08:39 PM

Some people and just plain mean and inflict pain unnecessarily on others. They just have no consideration for another's feelings. I hope this one isn't true. WEll written though.

Keep up the good work and welcome to Passions.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-05-05 08:55 PM

Nice writing...James

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 2003-05-08 07:03 AM

Good writing.....
Enjoyed!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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