Open Poetry #26 |
Fluff of Stuff |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As day broke on this fifth of May, fluff of stuff so calmly lay, in cherished bond with yet unborn, this fifth of May, this early morn… and tender reflective tear in eye of times and wayward gleams gone by to a younger and a slighter me in awe of wind-flung nest, babes three… for one small fluff of stuff had dashed too hard upon the earth, and rest… but three babes in wait of mother’s love, all they had? Two hands at best… but father, yes, he knew what to do as if by magic, a concocted brew by smallest dropper slipped bird’s stew bringing fluff to feathers, life, renewed… ~*~ Now, today, this nest is secure mama’s around, and Dad is sure to be at hand for all they need, and I? Sit back and watch their deeds for nature is at it’s best, alone, the strong survive; the weak, dethroned, and we shall see babes seek new flight some day soon, when it’s right. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-05-2003 07:13 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awwww great pictures *s wonderful, Karilea M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ohmygosh! This is so miraculous and I am so excited!! How much longer do you think? Ooooh I have such a hard time waiting. Thank you Karilea....thank you. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wow!..that didn't take long for those chicks to hatch...you must be mesmerized by the events happening just outside your house...wonderful poem and picture...please keep them coming.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just too precious!! Thankyou for this Karilea, isn't nature awesome? hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Karilea...you must think I need glasses...badly. Now that the tornado watch has just about ended and I feel calmer..and safer. I can see the eggs have indeed hatched and I can even see a tiny eye unopened!! Oh what a blessing! Thank you so much for this...thank you dear lady. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a story that begs to be told. . . again. . . and again. . . wonderful, my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thanks Karilea...I sure wouldn't have wanted to miss this...so cute!! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Awwww! And you the surrogate mother. What a joy this was to read and see. Thank goodness you are safe. The devastation I saw on TV absolutely broke my heart. Hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karilea: you know I love when you write about the birds . . . we shall see babes seek new flight some day soon, when it’s right. you betcha! xxoo |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Karilea... this is one precious write. alan p.s. IT is good to read your words again. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Alive with renewed life....I love the strength of nature and its gentle beauty...You write it perfectly... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - a lovely write of Fluff of Stuff... BC |
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