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Heartbreaker
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Heartbreaker |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Heartbreaker I am lying in bed I can not sleep Thinking about what happened During the day and I know there are A lot of things I could have said There are a lot Of things I could Not of said but You really did Hurt me, hurt my Heart hurt me as A person I wish You could see that You are a heartbreaker I thought you were Someone I could trust Someone I could talk to Someone who would be There for me but No you are a heartbreaker A breaker of all hearts My heart has gone And so have I I am going going gone Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
feelings well expressed, It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Krissy, if in reality you have been hurt by a heartbreaker, I'm sending you a great big loving hug. I have been a "victim" myself but never again! It seems we have to go through a whole bunch of unpleasant stuff as we go through life. Hopefully we gain in strength, wisdom and insight as we grow older---and pick out those kind of guys from a mile away. This poem has the power to affect your readers right in the pits of their stomachs. It was sooo real! Soooo vivid. I think my heart needs a bandaid and my stomach needs and antacid! This was a real, raw, write! That's some gain from your pain already! Drain your pain and write, write, write! You have talent! Warm loving hugs, EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Where is he, hon? Lemme at him... I'll teach him a few things about breaking such a tender heart!!! *S* I hope this is your vivid imagination and not reality. *S* Well done! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krissy, I thought I was the only one allowed to break your heart. Excellent work! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Eliza Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 58 |
Go hug your Mum, dear, she will make it better if only for a moment. A good write, our Krissy. Visit us more often, dear. |
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j-oh-E Member
since 2003-05-01
Posts 59Texas, USA |
Wow you're from England! I guess that goes to show you that love's the same throughout the world. I feel you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KrissySweets~ Okay ... pick me up at the airport !  I'll have at him BIG TIME ! You give yourself a great big  from me !(and if this is really-real, tell Anthony he'd better take off running while there's still time ! *Huglets* ~*Me ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
going going gone...yep! good strong write, powerful emotions! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
When tears fall as they sometimes do Look inside and seek hopes view Don’t imagine the tears will stay Soon enough they will fade away When hearts hurt as they sometimes can You wonder if it’s the fault of every man But soon the memory passes by And you’re left alone to wonder why? When words cut as they have before Just pick yourself up off the floor They are just words they can’t harm you Even though you think they do When wounds weep with hurt and pain Don’t despair to try again Give more than you ever have before And you’ll find you’ll receive so much more When tears fall as they will now and then Know that your smile will come again You don’t give up, don’t yield at all Inside your heart is love’s true call Mum I’m sorry beloved daughter I HAD TO DO IT, the devil made me do it, or more likely you did. You know I love this utterly utterly utterly   Love you always And forever Mum  Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Oh c'mon, stick around! Living well, and enjoying it, is the best revenge. Give it a shot. Thank you for sharing these painful thoughts. I wish you well. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm right behind (or alongside) suthern. Lemme at'em. Heart healing hugs to you, Krissy. |
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