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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon 
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Music so inspirational fuse it together with love and termoil strangers bleeding themselves seal it with the kiss of shame and send it off for others to claim Pretend you know what they feel complain about the biggest deal just let if fester and grow don't try to change the fact just for attention, you'll let it be known Rape thier lives absorbing merely a tidbit of thier cries and why they cry we'll never truly know but you'll fake it you'll put on a real convincing show Analyze every single word preform it like they've never even heard suck it dry selfishley devour it until it's gone then another one will fill his place another one will come along |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
intense.. what's this doing on the back page?? hugs, g "If you suppress laughter, it goes down and spreads out your hips."- Steve Allen |
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jennirey Member
since 2002-01-24
Posts 198North Richland HillsTx |
This was very haunting. Very very good read. Thanks for sharing. Jen |
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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
this one is really good keep it up |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Damn Talia: ok this one left a lump in my chest awesome write xxoo |
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Black Swan Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 165on the moon |
Thanks to all of you guys,~Talia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
extremely powerful! wow! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very intense...good read... believe in what your heart feels... |
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