Open Poetry #26 |
IF I Ever Wanted You |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
If I ever wanted you I know My heart will be crying out for you You would ever dream of me you would hear me cry I try To hold you You would have come And hold me When we dance and I fall Would you caught me In your arms If I ever wanted you I know my heart will call on you you would hear my heartbeat If I am wrong to love you If i know You are right person for me I will be happy Do anything for you When nights falls would you kiss me goodnight All day and night If I ever wanted you I would wanted more [This message has been edited by vandana (05-05-2003 10:45 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's surprising what the heart hears, isn't it, Vandana? Thank you for sharing yours... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Lovely thoughts..... Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very deep and touching write...I always enjoy hearing what is in your heart vandana |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Vandana, 'If I Ever Wanted You', the title alone is heart touching...as is the poem. Hugs, Pat |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
very interesting and creative piece--heartfelt and heartunderstood |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is very special. Enjoyed. Huggles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I agree V. thanx for sharing your heart with each of us here...much enjoyed... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You deserve to have your heart's desire fulfilled! Warm hugs, Linda |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I really liked this Tara |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely written Vandana! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
great title, nice thoughts, vandana *s M |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - your heart speaks well... BC |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful my friend. . . great work. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Enjoyed the lush of love here. TD |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, thank you for sharing your heart love with us. I enjoyed reading it. Hugs Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-06-2003 10:12 AM).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
If I ever wanted you I would wanted more ........ lovely... most enjoyed... regards, sudhir |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Vandana, I believe we all have these heartfelt feeling, dearest friend, I too long for my dream girl ever so much and it makes me cry longing for her but know that your love thinks the same way and soon you will finally get what you want! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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