Open Poetry #26 |
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What's a Mother?--having fun here |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
What’s a Mother? What’s a mother to do? He says he’s lost his shoe, and his mittens are all gone; they disappeared at dawn. Then sheslipped on the ice, not once, but really twice. She was skating in her socks around our city blocks. I asked them, “What were you thinking?” Aghast, they stood unblinking. Reminding me, they were, I’m telling you, fer sure, of deer in headlight’s glare for all they did was stare. “To bed with you my kids, before I flip my lid; your mother, I’ll always be, just let me have a spot of tea. Then together we will search across the land, or more, but likely we will find all ‘neath your bed, and on the floor.” ©May 4, 2003 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Virginia, this is really cute, and BTW I can relate to it well.....YES, definitely under the bed....the catch all spot of a kids humble sanctuary.... |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Awwwww, so cute (and soooo true!) When you think you have heard it all, |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Virginia, Yes, you captured children and their behavior perfectly....and the secret hiding place...for all lost items... (their only 'not my fault' is that washing machine which really does seem to eat socks, one of a pair, of course).... Love this, enjoyed, Pat ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very cute... ![]() M |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely written!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Virginia, this is really cute. I like it. ![]() Hugs, Ethel |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
naw I always lost my stuff under neath the couch! I was sure to be the good girl, I had the cleanest room in the house.. its the rest of the house that I hurricaned! ![]() lol this is great Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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