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Rippling Lake
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Rippling Lake |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sparkling… Joy so purely liquid Still, in glistening pool, A precious jewel Disturbed… In rings of feather whispers Moist to trembled touch Of secret depths, Welled in circled clutch Impressions… Rising to beseech the kisses breathed In ripples brought, from depths below A shimmered glow Spilling… Awash across the trembled swells in glee Each drop of you Within the pool of me Copyright Kkh 5/4/03 |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Each drop of you within the pool of me MAGNIFICENT!!! You get my vote...wonderuful..those lines are absolutely stunning.... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kathleen, Any writing style you choose is simply fabulous. I love this. I would vote to have an entire book of your poetry. If there is not one 'out there', there should be. Hugs, Pat  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
YES! I love these love ripples. as my sig shows: * May ripples of LOVE become waves of PEACE [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (05-04-2003 12:20 PM).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I love the presentation and your style. A fantastic write! You have my vote! Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
One for you, one, two for me.....Wait! That wasn't how it was supposed to go... Very enjoyable write, In goes the vote!! |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
wow, a beautiful and sensuous write... i can feel a ripple go through my body love, claire xxx |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
a very nice write!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - oh my, this is a good one for the book. My vote... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sparkling sensuality beautifully expressed. You have my vote. Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love your sparkle TD~ |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, this is so beautiful... The poem and you have my vote.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hey I wan't to write like that... Seriously, your style is supreme! Another vote coming your way... A wondrous piece! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful!! Charisma |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is a wonderful piece!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is just awesome. I especially love the last couple of lines ... Each drop of you Within the pool of me Huggles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A beautiful write, Kathleen. How could we not vote for it? Trust me, we cannot. |
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JingleBear Member
since 2003-05-08
Posts 76Pennsylvania, USA |
I admire the format of this poem and the words are just so peaceful. Nice job! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what imagery! wow... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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