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Tear Drops Falling
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Tear Drops Falling |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 Webshots Photo *~* Tear drops Fall from her eyes To help wash pain away Pain caused by someone she trusted Someone who she thought would not hurt her child But she was so terribly wrong In trusting this one man Who caused many Tear drops *~* [This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-04-2003 03:20 AM).] |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Wow... I like this very much. Maybe I'm just in the mood for anything that isn't happy tonight. hehe... but at any rate, I did like it a great deal.  Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my...if you only knew how deep this touches me... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Wow, my Ethel Mae is a moderator now? good for you lady, its another reflection of your devotion to poetry and your fellow poets. Sorry if i've seemed ignorant and not even bothered to stop by, but its been one of those couple of months where everythings been a mess regarding time. my computer is still not fixed, so any time i do get to spend on a computer, i have to type up the masses of college work i have. I hope you're well, and that you're not as sorrowful as you sound? hows gary? hope he's well too. I think my mum would relate to this beautifully sad poem. much much love to you  love gemma xxxxxxxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, My horse and lance is in the garage, just point me the way and I'll be off. Sad but good write.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - I agree with Seymour, point me in the direction also, and I'll ride there with him... BC |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
When I first saw the title of this poem I knew it would make me cry....so I put of reading it...but I kept being drawn back...you have indeed made me cry for the pain I feel in your words are from the heart....My heart goes out to you.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, I hope everything is okay, sweet friend, I am glad you are being honest about how you feel and I send angel hugs out to you and your daughter to be safe and loved together always! God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
a good work with so many interpretations, sorry I haven't been posting or writing for a while, it's been a tough couple of months, but I'm back |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Interesting poem, it not only made me sad but angry as well... nothing gets me madder then an adult taking advantage of a younger person... I hope all is well GarysGirl? Thanks for sharing, I hope her eyes rain only tears of happiness now... Blessings, Richy |
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