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In Need of Tomorrow
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In Need of Tomorrow |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
In Need of Tomorrow I'm not sure about you. What you're attempting to do. Ever since you hurt me. No matter how hard I try to allow the good feelings to survive you still hurt me. Enough is enough. On another day perhaps I could put you away. But definately not today. That's why I'm in need of tomorrow. JamesLee May03 2003 [This message has been edited by JamesMichael (05-03-2003 08:29 PM).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
and aren't we all? You expressed this well. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Ahhh yes... the hope of another day... Nice work JM Richy |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Yes, sometimes I understand how that feels. It hurts so bad, and you just one to let it go... but just not today... coz today you want to be allowed to wallow in misery... You'll pick yourself up tomorrow. Tomorrow, you'll be stronger. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
Every one needs something to look forward to, if not for tomorow, where would we be? Enjoy tomorrow, yesterday is gone. quatro |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That's why I'm in need of tomorrow. Tomorrow....I could use one of those....I'd even settle for next Tuesday.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Deeply heartfelt and touching to the reader...It made my heart hurt for any who are hurt by others....Well done... |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a beautiful heartfelt poem. Did you know you had a poem accepted for publication in the book? Check out the tabulations page, you might still be able to get in.  Dawn [This message has been edited by DawnG (05-05-2003 12:39 AM).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I liked Tara |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Are we not all in need of another tomorrow? Good write James! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Everyday is a new beginning.... a fresh start. This is a very heartfelt piece. Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Yes...yes! |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
"Enough is enough. On another day perhaps I could put you away. But definately not today." Enjoyed this! We could all use a tomorrow every once in a while. quatro |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
James, It may take a few tomorrows to forget about the hurt. If she was meant to be again in your life, she will be patient in your tomorrows. I hope this makes sense? I really liked this one... makes me think of that man who I love and am giving him his tomorrows to decide he loves me. -Patricia |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
James, this one was written from the heart....I know because I could feel your hurt. Hugs, friend Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm with ya! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Yes, tomorrow is way too precious, so let it all go today so then you have no burden to have to surmount every coming day! (sigh) Letting go is the hardest part I know but you can do it, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
indeed, tomarrow always a brand new start. Good poem I enjoyed reading it, keep writing! |
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Frank Tymon Junior Member
since 2003-05-11
Posts 27California, USA |
Odd. The emotions we all seem to share. Frank Tymon |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Then may tomorrow bring what you wish for most, James. |
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