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| Open Poetry #26 |
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By My own Recommendation |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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By My Own Recommendation Pretend I did not exist You will forget soon enough Just remember the smooth I will cope with the rough I shall find the strength Who needs people like you When you need a shoulder Remember I have a queue I've been this way before My heartsrings being played Tunes and false pretenses You're becoming quite staid I have grown much wiser Since being on the internet The words upon a screen Those players I will not forget It's been seven long years The queue is getting longer But remember I have hope My persistance got stronger Fooled once , never twice Lessons learned each day Entering the school of life The happy mixes with dismay In climbing my weak side Each day in determination I have to believe in myself By my own recommendation Hope©2003 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very heartfelt and I see you DO believe in yourself and that's essential. Love, Margherita |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!!! You words reflect your inner self and share a heart with us that has grown so much by enduring the pain of life...it is what has given you a true artist heart....We feel your pain through your words and can only hope that in the grand design there has come much joy and happiness along with the hurtful times...**big hugs** Take care, Hope. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
May I compliment you on your recommendation and your words which have inspired me! -Patricia |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Hope~ Very strong and positive. Enjoyed the read...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Hope a great message in this one, and if one believes in themself they eventually will become invincible or at the very least impervious to the pain. Great writing. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I love your self assurance and strength in this.... Very nice!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! just what I needed tonight Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Maegherita , thank you believing in myself is what I am learning, it as taken years Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thank you Karen , often through the sad times , I have to call on my inner strength Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Patricia for your kind reply , yes I am able to write this because others have inspired me along the way Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thank you Paul , I guess sometimes the strong side overides the weak Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thank you Sharon , yes I guess somehow an inner strength I seem to maintain , again and again it hepls me over the hurt and pain Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Bridgette , I have always had a very low self -esteem , by writing it as helped my confidence grow a little Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey dixie , so glad you enjoyed and hope it helped Hope |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
well said... and well written as well... regards sudhir |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This reminds me of those situations that you don't want to go through but you find yourself right in the middle of them...but somehow you know that no matter how long it takes or how hard it is you will make it through...James |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thank you James , yes you are so right ... in fact I have just finished writing one of those "feeling used poems " so various situations enable me to put feeling into verse Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you for your kind words in reply Sudhir , much appreciated Hope |
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